Oral presentation: My Research Project

OBSERVATION:

I used a powerpoint presentation as a resource, it was enough attractive and relevant but I think that I should have included some music at background to improve the presentation. I tried also to keep the eye contact and don't read a lot from my notes. Also I had in my mind that it was important to do some body language, so the audience won't be bored. The ideas were well organized and I remarked my steps of presentation.
I think that the information which I introduced to my audience was new and entertaining, and what I did is search all information about the topic I was doing, later get the most important ideas and reach the main goal which I have completed succesfully. My grammar wasn't good enough, I admit it, but instead of that I tried to include new words and new manners of expressing myself to the audience and that's a good point. I think that fillers and linkers were enough exposed in presentation , so in my opinion they were ok.
Talking about pronounciation, I want to add that my pronounciation wasn't so good as could be because I was bit nervous and that affected my way to express and folow the good pronounciation, also I think that not native people from England as I, can't reach that perfect pronounciation but with practice we can reach a very high level. I made some pauses while I was talking, to remind what I was going to say next and my tone of voice was clear and good.

I think that this presentation was good and my mark could be an 8.5 .